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[500 Soldiers (WIP)]

wip or not

At the very least, slap a compressor on the master channel.
This track sounds like it would be very enjoyable with mastering even at a minimum level.
I really can't wait to hear what you're going to do after where it cuts off.
It's very awkward as it is now.

DENT-de-lion responds:

Hahaha. Yeah, I know dude! I was just excited about it - this song still has a lot of work left... I'm just taking a long break from it. I'm a little burnt out from my collaborations. I'll finish it in a little while and let you know. Thanks for the review!

[Klaas? Electrowhat]

I was gonna do electro

But you ended up blowing my mind.

Me myself am trying to hop out of the dubstep scene and into pure, heavy, El3xt\ro /\/\uzix
You have skills, sir.

If I don't keep my eye on you, bug me about it xDD

DJ-Qwamii responds:

Thanks! :P I love electro <3

[Here And Now.]

Now and Then

Here and There

It's very rough.
The vocals are hard to hear, you might consider lowering the piano volume or side-chaining the voice onto the piano channel.
Allot of the sounds are clashing and merging too much, put a compressor on the main channel.

Hard to listen to, but it does seem to sound like it will be decent with some mastering.

KillTheTrucker responds:

Yea, you're right. Didn't had the time to mix and master things out clearly yet.
Thanks for your review!

[Blood! - KyvoX]

Blud

Over all it's pretty damn good :3
There's some elements it could use around the beginning of the middle of the song.
I always recommend pads or elements for this.
Otherwise this track will keep really anybody entertained with it playing somewhere in the background.
It has nice bass, good scores, the automation is a nice touch.

KyvoX responds:

Thanks, it lacks some atmosphere in the middle, i'll try the pads ! Glad you like it :)

[Foul Mechanism]

Deep Dark Dank

The crushers are wicked, and before you know it, you have a pulsing baseline in there. You're right about the song progressing slowly. I'm normally not too keen about listening to this kind of music in my spare time.
But it would make an awesome Filmscore or Soundtrack for an eerie Video-game! The crushers that come in make you wonder, what kind of machine could make such a sound?
I imagine a flesh covered factory machine in a dark grieving cave, like Yume Nikki for example. Very complex sounding, I hope you enjoyed creating it.
It was enjoyable to listen to for imagining things.

Van-pl responds:

Why, yes, I enjoyed every aspect of creating this!
I'm very glad that you pulled this much of a expression from it, and actually found it intriguing and enjoyable :)

Thank you for your great rewiev!

[A Nice Place To Call Hell]

Upbeat

*to other listeners: it gets good at 0:18

It has an interesting use of tempo change. You did very well on your synth lead, it kept me fairly entertained. I really see that there should be something playing as the beat slows down. The song could stand to have a soft element playing, strings or pads would be a good choice.
Otherwise, the beat slowing down stretches for a very long time. The cymbal you used at the end was a nice touch though, hah.
It moves from intense battle music to happy, to calm.
I enjoyed this song, thanks~!

Cebster responds:

After finishing a song, its always tough to swallow criticism, but I gotta say, great review. Really was nice to hear, so thank you. Yeah the song needs work but I'm glad you enjoyed it ( for the most part.)

[Snailiad - Moon Snail]

Tight

The pitch bend in points of the bass, the tom before the beat slows down, the way it slows down and speeds up with different instruments differently. Those are the three bits of the track that make it outstanding.
I'm going to assume you got some reverences from Rock music for that bass instrument.
I'm not referring to the sub sound that comes in, just the low square/saw wave.

Gah, I just woke up I'm not awake all the way.
Bare with my half arsed review.

auriplane responds:

Cool, thanks for the detailed review! XD

[Electrode Step [BluGil]]

Nice Drop

That drop was huge, I was starting to wonder what was at the end of that trail at the beginning.It's got gut, it's got punch, it's got groove. I <3 it

Which VSTi are you referring to btw?

BluGil responds:

Thanks mate I appreciate it,
And I was using Massive haha. Just began with some bass preset and did some tweaking. Honestly this was a pretty lazy track, probably only an hour or two of work total.

[Sexual Space Voyage]

Your Music makes me sexy!

The poly pad at the beginning are awesome at 0:23. Care to give a brief explanation as to what you used(program/vsti)?
I've been trying to make that type of sound for a long while now, I've been doing something wrong quite wrong whenever I try.
But the real question is, why haven't more people heard this?
If you review other people's music you'll find that people wander over to your music and hear you. And you find new inspirations like I am right now!
Man, I want all my friends to hear your music, I'm going to download it and take it to work with me tomorrow!
I <3 you!

OcularNebula responds:

lol, your questions and gayness are flattering! At 0:23 I tweaked a PoiZone preset (LED Dwarf MC) by turning off the mono so it could play chords, and adjusting some other stuff.

Yeah, I kinda figured about the reviews, since I myself often check out people who review me, but there are just so many submissions on ng and most of them are mediocre