Advice and handling
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I'm not sure if you have a strong enough compressor on the master channel if at all.
There's crackling on headphones at the piano part with the lower frequencies.
The bass drum lacks a bass to it, making it hard to use for a thump even with powerful speakers. It also relies on whether or not you're intending for this to be played on loud speaker or not. Where as I know you wouldn't want the kick to hit specific frequencies, it feels cornered between the instruments making it weak and feeble.
Near the 1:57 mark a strong thump does come in but it doesn't stay long.
This is one of those harder pieces for some people to get into from just the intro.
Over-all I was slightly disappointed, but that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy this piece.
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keep up the good work!