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fairly done

some parts have too much chaos while others don't. It's really off balance(the chaos and bass) nearing the end and the finish. Work on it a little ._.

please ._.

Awesome

I've got some advice, after you export it as one song(can vary on which program as well), export each instrument on it's own wav file and use something like Audacity(free program mind you) to re-organize the sound waves(of course you'd want to export it as a whole as well to help organize them), pusty but it can work for future editing. With your skills I recommend getting the full version of that software...of which, what is that software?

review.

It seems to need a beat somewhere in the middle of that mess, probably around 0:16 or 0:30. As for the saw shaped sounds that comes in, it sounds like you need to compress it a little, to lower that extra buzz in the speaker. It has variation in melody but some other instruments would be nice. You can choose of several things like pads, arpeggios or gated syntheses.

It's really not good or bad at this point, just in need of development.

Wait...

How long was I listening to this again?

man drifty.

Pretty nifty

Even though you say it's old, I'll still critique.
It has nice transitions, but the vocal part could use some dithering.
The loop could stand to be longer yet it's good enough as it is. It'd work well for menu music on an animation of some sort.

If I were to that it would need a dark and flowing look to it.
Which is how the music sounds ^_^

SonicJ responds:

Thanks for the review. I pretty much stopped visualizing what the song would be used for, at the point when I made this song. The voices, I don't get. Dithering?

Lame, Absolutly Lame !

It sux so bad I rated it 5/1 and 100/10

srsly tho, it's really good XD

Metaljonus responds:

lol thx!

Originality

Besides the fact that this is the tetris's tune, this has allot of originality. However I would like to see allot more progressiveness, variety, and some automation shifts as this goes along. Sounds super nice compared to my first music collaboration, yuck.

Step responds:

Lol, thanks :). It's true that it didn't change much. We might continue it based on your helpful critisism. Thanks again! :)

A tip for the way

Instead of trying to play it like it`s note for note, Play it soul for note, it`ll come out bétter..

MormoMaker responds:

rawgreen! long time no see! :D lol okay, i'll be sure to try that, thanks!

Less mainstream, More goodness!

"The glitch goodness that is. This imperfect piece shows the high low quality of the profound and yet unknown style of glitching. The screaming and grinding in our ears we hear today makes raves seem better than any other live concert. As the corporate scum main-streamers turn children into walking zombies, walking not to what they like, but to what the scum decides. We however are not of this! We have set a stand against this scum as we experience the freedom to choose the undergrounds. Newgrounds."

Your song turned me on man, Thank you.
-RawGreen

inspired

yet once again. You rock baby.

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