RawGreen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shadows Swallowed Her]

The whole thing is Epic

I don't know what everyone's problems are.

mr-vincent responds:

lol, me 2. I could try to redo it longer and i think they will close their mouth with thei "3" and "5".... Thanks

[Listen To The Silence]

Funny

It isn't silence I'm hearing...it's something better.

Firefreezer responds:

Okay, thanks for that! :D

[Building]

Building

It's like you've built an assault tower to shoot explosive teddy bears against the zombies to help you sleep better at night.

It's a very violent and vigorous piece, as transitions twise and pound from one to the other and to calm to disturbed. The electronic twists sound very complex, a fan of Intelligent Dance Music would go berserk over this.
This song is pretty damn sexy.

I hope someone makes an epic animation to it sometime, who knows, if I get 5 weeks time to sneak in animating non-stop after work and school I think I could do it :o

InvisibleObserver responds:

Funny that several people said this was 'vigorous' after you. They be plagiaramarising your ideas. Off with their heads, head phones and all.

[SliceX]

So that's what your voice sounds like

It's not bad, composed pretty good too.

I'm going to mess with this since you uploaded it to newgrounds :D
credited of course.

2tailedknight responds:

awesome ^W^

[Striker Techno]

I don't feel like saying much

but I'll just say it's good enough for a 5/5 and a 10/10

[Dot Dot Dot]

ah wah xD

Epic voice man, xD
epic subject man, xD

BLAAAAAAM THIS PIECE OF CRAP!!!

hahah xD

[Power by: 2tk]

Advice

I'm very positive that this is quite old now, but it's still good.

Like mentioned before, some Mastering would be good.
On the other note, compression would be good in the master channel to prevent that overdrive distortion from the piano.

You've utilized the Fruity Slayer Very well in this one.

As far as repetitiveness, variations of the same melody tend to work if you're not too tedious about it.

2tailedknight responds:

yes this is old and the compression idea is indeed a very good one.

now if i'm right that's the "fruity limiter" right? the one that makes it not overdrive?

let me know and thank you very much for your critique

[jungle techno]

Composition

The Compositions and transitions are very very good. The choices of instruments are not extravagant but they bring the jungle colors, you might say.

The clicking from the drum set is a bit high, or perhaps too sharp, you might look into having a subtle reverb put on the drums to prevent it from being too "sharp" ,but you don't want too much damping or diffusion( if these nobs are available ) because you want to keep the element drums make a song feel.

With that on note, there could be a few Mastering things done. I'll leave you to discover those things someday simply because, well, there's endless things you can do with proper, professional and experimental mastering.

2tailedknight responds:

hello again. i use the 200$ version of FLstudio and yes i did actually purchase it lol.

now reverb, i've never really understood what it does, but i will try to mess with it.

as with the clicking, well i actually have a very hard time with drums. i BS it very badly ^^;;;

thank you very much for the critique

[Ganjaman WiP]

Wooo! Collaboration!

I wish I could do a collaboration with my friends soon. 2 of them are learning how to use fruityloops in this stage.

I really love this man, you guys are doing well ^^

la-yinn responds:

Woo indeed haha. Well my friends are actually in that stage right now too, but working together on music is always ten times as fun as doing it alone, you should try working with your friends too, it'll help them improve faster.

Thanks for the review! :-)

[inhale (8 9 10 mix)]

It's IDM but it fits pretty well in DnB

Some Retard bombed it, so to whoever it was, screw you.

As to you, the creator of this grumble-bum jam, I love it. It took full advantage of my Stereo as I felt the well placed bass blasted vibrations to rattle the water valve in the bathroom open.
The orgasmic chill was pretty awesome.

I have absolutely no criticism.

oddfellowfloyd responds:

Hehe, thank you, mate, for the awesome words!

Pleased to hear that my music is making geographic phenomina, haha!