RawGreen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[STH: Two worlds collide]

It was very intertaining to watch.

The effects you did on your own were really cool.
You show some potential for directing.

You could use some sound editing to prevent clipping in the audio, it can be done right inside of flash as well. Just a little volume control so it's not at max all the time.
If you have music playing as well as voice acting you're going to want the music to be slightly quieter than the Voices.

And, after scrolling down and reading your negative comments since they actually can portray good feedback in a deconstructive form,... if they actually say anything.

The comment from KhawnerL is...the only example...
It would be really cool to see someone with your skills to make something from scratch!
Lots of people admire this and it will stand out more than JUST doing fanimations. don't get me wrong though, I've done some fan animations and I've seen some pure awesome fan animations out there.

Anyways, like I was saying a little bit of sound editing to give each sound it's own space and it should be good.
If you don't want your text to jitter so much try breaking it(ctrl+b twice)
you won't be able to edit the text as text after breaking it though.

Great animation, loved the effects, cliche, and sounds are too loud together..

SXR123 responds:

Ya see?! This is the kind of comment I like! THANK YOU for an honest review!

I will be working on these, and just to let you know, this movie is one of the last sprite films I'll be making.

[Christmas Tolonius]

Well done!

Your efforts show, this collab was pretty well done!

CloudEater responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Naughty Naughty]

hrmmm

you coulda made this so much better, I bet you still could, just like, add more scenes to it, it's really funny at the beginning :p

zedd56 responds:

thanks ^^
but yeah, 10 minutes is as long as my ADD will allow :P

[clock day `o8]

it's okay

I like the music..... did you make it? who made it?

threeeyedfreak responds:

THE MUSIC IS UNDER THE VIDEO SORRY i DIDNT MAKE IT.

[Hawk VS NegaDrain]

better than your erlier

improving swiftly. arent we?

TeamXHawk responds:

hehe, thanks man. Guess I have improved a bit.